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looks like im going to have to pick this up=) keep writing and =) happy gaming (=

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lol serenityinthesky i love your quote

=) I think you put them together nicely, saying that when i don't quite like the song, but thats my opinion. Congradulations =) keep writing and =) happy reading (=

Candmium, "silly sounding words" are to make the reader have thoughts of humor, and humor is most commonly assosiated with love, actually in many cases. and, the eyes are twinkling ...

no point, it is just the view of sombody who is veiwing almost nothing at all it is sort of dull and full of nothing keep writing and =) happy ...

The poem is a bit dark... its got a good understandable theme, im not the type to critisize your format or anything, you could work on keeping your stanzas flowing ...

I don't much care what anyone says about it, bad grammar faulty writing... This is a good poem... Congradulations its an awe-inspiring literal piece of work keep writing =) happy ...

I liked the poem, yes it's over used, unoriginal, but it would have been original at one time keep writing and =) happy reading (=

It is a scene for a by-polar mind many times the mind is split into what most spychologists call moral and immoral and the first stanza represents the immoral the ...

Nice poem I enjoyed it, very descriptive as if like a stalker in detailed perception. Congradulations Keep writing and =) happy reading (=

beutifull, and great use of conversational tone between characters Congradulations! keep writing and =) happy reading (=

I'm sorry, but im going to have to agree... This poem is only like all the other's barely a theme at all in any sort of existance, and its just ...

don't take it to hard there are alot of overly drastic criticts that "drive to ruin peoples lifes work"-rosethorn keep writing and =) happy reading (=

Good expression of fealings. I like your poem, but in two instances you had 3 syllables on your 2 syllable long streak and it kind of through off the beat ...